Ture stories where I used concise words, but it has never been refined. Share my horrible experience.

That night I was sleeping when suddenly I could hear two people talking in my bedroom, one was a girl and the other was a man. At the same time, I saw a bunch of green lights in the mirror right across from my bed, and I could not get any word out. Suddenly two cold hands were pulling my legs. I was scared to death. Finally, I yelled out my voice, then I could move my torso. The next day I asked my parents if they had talked that night. They said NO. How terrible!

The Second

My uncle would be 72 now if he were alive! I clearly remembered it was around July 15th on Chinese Lunar Calendar, our traditional ghost festival. There will be a lot of ghosts, spirits or spectres in the street. The old ones say that hellgate will open on this day. It is a day for the dead to come home and meet their family. Maybe it was about 3 days before that day and I was lying on the couch and it was at around 3 A.M. At 5A.M, my head hit my pillow. Suddenly I heard people setting off firecrackers. I found many neighbors talking. I thought it might be a wedding. In a few seconds one woman called my name out and said that my uncle had come back to visit me. Then I woke up, standing by the window and staring through the window panes. I found nobody outside. Then I rolled myself into my bed, sweating!

Believe it or not , this is my first time to write this. I spent 40 mins doing this! Really; it is true!

Please think if it happed to you. What would you do?

Very well written!

This is a true story, in which I share a horrible experience. I'm attempting to be concise, but my writing needs to be refined. 

I was asleep the night it happened, when suddenly I could hear two people talking in my bedroom. One was a girl and the other was a man. At the same time, I saw a bunch of green lights in the mirror which is right across from my bed, but I could not get a word out. Suddenly two cold hands were pulling on my legs.I was scared to death. Finally, I my voice returned and I yelled out, then I could move my torso again.The next day, I asked my parents if they had talked last night.They said NO. How terrible!

The Second Experience

My uncle would be 72 years old if he were still alive! I remember it clearly. It was around July 15th on Chinese Lunar Calendar - it is our traditional ghost festival. During this festival there are a lot of ghosts, spirits and specters in the street. The old-folks say that the gates of Hell open on this day. It is a day for dead people to come home and meet their family. Maybe it was about 3 days before that day,I was lying on the couch and it was at around 3 A.M. At 5 A.M, my head hit my pillow. Suddenly,I  heard people setting off firecrackers. I found many neighbors talking. I thought it might be a wedding. After a few seconds, one woman called my name out and said that my uncle had come back to visit me. Then I woke up, standing by the window and staring outside through the window panes. I found nobody outside.Then I rolled my sweaty body back into my bed!

Believe it or not , this is my first time to write it in stories.I spent 40min doing this!Really they are true!

Please think of if it happed to you,what do you think?