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My first lines
This is my first writing and, to be honest, I´m quite nervous.I don´t know if there is someone who could read this text or even someone who could correct it.
First of all I´m from Spain and I love the English language because It´s a good way to discover new things, as, for example, movies or books; hHowever, it´s hard to me to speak in English to native speakers because I feel unconmfortable! I think I can´t talkspeak as well as I could and the only words I can say are: "Hello, ok, good".
I hope one day it will be better.
I would like to know how I can improve my linesspeaking! I mean, using advanced language estructures.
Thanks for reading!
Your English sounds pretty good to me. I know it is difficult to speak, but it is the only way to improve. Is there an English conversation club in your city? That is a good way to learn, as well as to gain confidence and meet English speakers.
The difference between "to speak" and "to talk" - to speak is when it comes from you, and to talk, when it is part of a conversation. Also, "to speak" is a little more formal.
Hola Cristina,
gran trabajo para su primier verbos! Me gustaría hablo en español con usted un día y ayudaste en ingles.
Un saludo,
My first lines
I don´t know if there is someone who could read this text or even someone who could correct it.
First of all I´m from Spain and I love the English language because It´s a good way to discover new things as, for example, movies or books; however, it´s hard for to me to speak in English with native speakers because I feel uncomfortable! I feel like I can´t speak as well as I would like to and the only words can say are: "Hello, ok, good".
I hope one day it will be better.
I would like to know how I can improve my lines! I mean using advanced language estructures.
Thanks for reading!
My first lines
This is my first writing and, to be honest, I´m quite nervous.I don´t know if there is someone who could read this text or even someone who could correct it.
First of all I´m from Spain and I love the English language (or I love English) because It´s a good way to discover new things such as (or new things like), for example, movies or books; however, it´s hard to for me to speak in English to native speakers because I feel uncomfortable! I think I can´t talk as well as I could would like and the only words I can say are: "Hello, ok, good".
I hope one day it will be better.
I would like to know how I can improve my lines(??)! I mean using advanced language structures.
Thanks for reading!
Very good Cristina! Just some minor corrections in red and suggestions or alternatives in blue.
I wasn’t sure what you meant by “improve my lines”, for example did you mean speaking or writing or something else?
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