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kane park
I'd love to get some feedbacks on my essay. (2)
And all those needed just are not followed after a great love for what we do. Maybe It even could be inverse/reverse/ the other way around. Because you know how to do properly or have the perseverance, you are able to feel love for anything.
I’ve been getting sick of some people who give too much credit to their love for their work. Is it really?
When they portray the first moment when they encounter the work they love in the present, I think they just get a little too much sentimental. I can agree with the fact that just as much as the person love that work, the first moment they get to know the work is special. But I don’t agree with some saying that they are meant to that work.
For sure, everyone has different aptitude and interests generally. And yet There are still variety of work that you might love to do. So it seems to me that getting to love your job is more of knowing how to get better rather than just finding a particular thing that comes as it looks perfect for you.
However, while I think like this, this aphorism still bugs me, because one thing is also true and that is the fact that I might’ve ignored my own feeling. the other side of myself have been hoping that that kind of yearning, like the yearning for vast and endless sea, happens to me someday. Somewhat this aphorism instilled into my mind that there is something waiting for me outside in the world that truly fascinates me, captivates me
2018年6月25日 01:40
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And all those needed just are not followed after a great love for what we do. (<--I'm having difficulty understanding what this sentence means by itself). Maybe It even could be (the inverse sounds good) inverse/reverse/ the other way around, because if you know how to do it properly or have the perseverance, you are able to feel love for anything. I’ve been getting sick of some people who give too much credit to their love for their work. Is it really (____)? When they portray the first moment when they encounter the work they love in the present, I think they just get a little too much sentimental.
I can agree with the fact that just as much as the person loves that work, the first moment they get to know the work is special (this sentence is a bit confusing). But However, I don’t agree with some people saying who say that they are meant to do that work. For sure, everyone has different aptitudes and interests generally. And yet, there are is still a variety of work that you might love to do. So It seems to me that getting to love your job is more of knowing how to get better improve, rather than just finding a particular thing that comes as it looks perfect easily to for you. However, while I think like this, this aphorism still bugs me, because one thing is also true: and that is the fact that I might’ve ignored my own feelings. The other side of myself have has been hoping that that this kind of yearning, like the yearning for the vast and endless sea, happens to me someday. Somehow this aphorism is instilled into my mind that there is something waiting for me outside in the world that truly fascinates me, captivates me.
2018年6月25日
Thanks for your comment. I really appreciate it.
and I don't know if it's because you wasn't able to read the first part of this writing, some corrected parts wasn't what I meant to say, I think. They are two as following.
1.Although it could be that because you know how to do something properly or have the perseverance to see it through, you are able to feel love for anything.
2.When they portray the first moment when they began (working) they focus on the present. I think they become a little too sentimental
Maybe I wanted to say like
when they portray the first moment when they found out what they love to do, I think they become a little too sentimental.
Here's the address where you can read the rest of the writing : https:// https://www.italki.com/notebook/4724208/entry/913039
2018年6月25日
If I could find your first post, then I could correct this better. Best of luck with your essay and always do what you are passionate about.
2018年6月25日
And all those are needed; they are just not followed after a great love for what we do. Although it could be that because you know how to do something properly or have the perseverance to see it through, you are able to feel love for anything.
I’ve been getting sick of people who give too much credit to their love for their work. Is it really?
When they portray the first moment when they began (working) they focus on the present. I think they become a little too sentimental. I agree with the fact that just as much as the person loves that job, the first moment is special. However I don’t agree with some saying that they are meant to do that work.
Certainly, everyone has different aptitudes and interests in general. Yet there is still a variety of jobs you might love to do. So it seems to me that to love your job is more of knowing how to get better rather than just finding a particular thing that comes as it looks perfect for you.
However, while I think like this, this aphorism still bugs me, because one thing which is also true is the fact that I might’ve ignored my own feelings. One part of me has had that kind of yearning, like the yearning for the vast and endless sea. I hope it happens someday. This aphorism is still somewhat instilled into my mind that there is something waiting for me out there in the world that truly fascinates me, captivates me.
I’ve been getting sick of people who give too much credit to their love for their work. Is it really?
When they portray the first moment when they began (working) they focus on the present. I think they become a little too sentimental. I agree with the fact that just as much as the person loves that job, the first moment is special. However I don’t agree with some saying that they are meant to do that work.
Certainly, everyone has different aptitudes and interests in general. Yet there is still a variety of jobs you might love to do. So it seems to me that to love your job is more of knowing how to get better rather than just finding a particular thing that comes as it looks perfect for you.
However, while I think like this, this aphorism still bugs me, because one thing which is also true is the fact that I might’ve ignored my own feelings. One part of me has had that kind of yearning, like the yearning for the vast and endless sea. I hope it happens someday. This aphorism is still somewhat instilled into my mind that there is something waiting for me out there in the world that truly fascinates me, captivates me.
2018年6月25日
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