#8 The fair in Chile
The fair in Chile is, tired sellers are put in a street with him products. They are sell fruit, veggetables, fish, eggs. Like a little market.
Else you can found food step, fruit juice, patty, puffed corn and others.
This morning I was to the fair near of my house. I buy bananas, grapes, oranges, lettuces, patatoes, and green beans.
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This morning, I
Me encantan las ferias Chilenas!! Vivi en Chile por casi 2 anos en total, y cuando hablo de la feria con otros gringos, digo feria. Fair no tiene mucho sentido. Tambien podrias decir farmers market u outdoor market
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#8 The fair in Chile
At the fair in Chile there are tired sellers putting products in the street. They are selling fruit, vegetables, fish and eggs. Like a little market.You can find food, fruit juice, patties, puffed corn and other things.
This morning I was at the fair near my house. I bought bananas, grapes, oranges, lettuces, potatoes, and green beans.
Not bad Johanna, just some grammar mistakes. Hope this helps :)
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#8 The Fair in Chile {Main words in titles are capitalized in English composition}
Elsewhere, you can found food step ingredients/staples (?)[3], fruit juice, {beef?} patties, [4] puffed corn, and others.
This morning, I was to the fair near of my house. I buy bought [5] bananas, grapes, oranges, lettuces, patatoes, and green beans.
[1] Refers to sellers, so "their".
[2] "Like a little market" is not a complete sentence since there is no verb, so you cannot have it as a standalone sentence.
[3] I don't know what you mean by "food steps."
[4] "Patties" is too general a term.
[5] "This morning" signifies the past.
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