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Johanna Muñoz
#10 The new In the last week, I saw in the news a restorant who was cheating a two tourists. But a chilean woman see this act and she was begin to record and explain the cheat. The waiter is charge more than what they consumed in the restorant. Finally they pay the just. And the chilean woman load the video to internet and coming the video on the tv.

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#10 The new

Last week I saw in the news that a  restaurant was scamming two tourists. A Chilean woman saw this act and she began recording and explained the situation. The waiter charged more than what they consumed in the restaurant. Finally they payed the bill. The Chilean woman uploaded the video online and the video will be on tv. 
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In the last week, on the news I heard a report about a restaurant that tried to cheat two tourists. A Chilean woman seen the act and she recorded the tourists being cheated and explained what was happening while she was recording. The waiter charged more than what the tourists owed to the restaurant for their meal. In the end, they paid only what they owed for their meal. The Chilean woman  uploaded the video to the internet and the video was then shown on the news on TV.

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Hi Johanna 

Hereby the correction of your text!

Regards

Karen 


#10 The news

In the  Last week, I saw in the news a video about a restaurant that was cheating on two tourists. However, a Chilean woman witnessed this act, began to record it  and explains what happened. The waiter tries to charge more than what they consumed / ate in the restaurant. Fortunately, they pay the correct amount at the end. And The Chilean woman uploaded the video on the internet and now, everyone can watch it on tv. 
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Regrettable it is in Chile. And yes, the internet and be all conected is amazing.
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It is amazing what is capture nowadays on cell phones and put online.

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