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Josep
Please help me correcting this!
It's 12:30 and I'm sitting in the library right now. My classmates are eating lunch together, but I'm not hungry yet. At home, we eat never this early. Today our journal topic is culture shock. It's a good topic for me right now because I'm being pretty homesick. I miss my old routine. At home, we always are eating a big meal at 2:00 in the afternoon. Then we rest. But here in Toronto i am having a 3:00 conversation class. Every day I almost fall asleep in class, and my teacher ask me, "Are you bored?" Of course I am not bored. I just need my afternoon nap! This class always is fun. This semester we work on a project with video cameras. My team is filming groups of people from different cultures. We are analyze "social distance". That means how close to each other these people stand. According to my new watch, it's 12:55, so I leave now for my 1:00 class. Teachers here really aren't liking tardiness!
2018年9月25日 00:25
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It's 12:30pm and I'm sitting in the library. My classmates are eating lunch together, but I'm not hungry. At home, we never eat this early. Today our journal topic is culture shock. It's a good topic for me right now because I'm feeling pretty homesick. I miss my old routine. At home, we always ate big meal around 2pm, followed by a rest. Here in Toronto I have a conversation class at 3pm. Every day, I'm almost falling asleep in class, and my teacher asks me, "Are you bored?" Of course I'm not bored. I just need my afternoon nap! This class always is fun. This semester we are working on a project with video cameras. My team is filming groups of people from different cultures. We are analyzing "social distance". This is to do with how close people stand to one another. According to my new watch, it's 12:55pm, so I need to leave as I have a class at 1pm. The teachers here really dislike... !
I don't know what you mean by 'tardiness!
I don't know what you mean by 'tardiness!
2018年9月25日
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Please help me by correcting this!
It's 12:30 and I'm sitting in the library right now. My classmates are eating lunch together, but I'm not hungry yet. At home, we eat never this early. Today our journal topic is culture shock. It's a good topic for me right now because I'm pretty homesick. I miss my old routine. At home, we always eat a big meal at 2:00 in the afternoon. Then we rest. But here in Toronto I have a 3:00 conversation class. Every day I almost fall asleep in class, and my teacher asks me, "Are you bored?" Of course I am not bored. I just need my afternoon nap! This class is always is fun. This semester we are working on a project with video cameras. My team is filming groups of people from different cultures. We are analyzing "social distance". That means how close to each other these people stand. According to my new watch, it's 12:55, so I am leaving now for my 1:00 class. Teachers here really don't like tardiness!2018年9月25日
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Please help me correcting this!
It's 12:30 and I'm sitting in the library right now. My classmates are eating lunch together, but I'm not hungry yet. At home, we never eat this early. Today, our journal topic is culture shock. It's a good topic for me right now because I'm pretty homesick. I miss my old routine. At home, we always eat a big meal at 2:00 in the afternoon. Then we rest. But here in Toronto I have a 3:00 conversation class. Every day I almost fall asleep in class, and my teacher asks me, "Are you bored?" Of course I am not bored, I just need my afternoon nap! This class is always fun. This semester we are working on a project with video cameras. My team is filming groups of people from different cultures. We are analyzing "social distance". That means how close to each other these people stand. According to my new watch, it's 12:55, so I leave now for my 1:00 class. Teachers here really don't like tardiness!2018年9月25日
Hi Josep, this is very well written, there are only a few mistakes. When using "always," we usually put it after auxiliary verbs (am, are, is) and before other verbs.
For example:
- I am always late.
- We always run together.
It typically goes after verbs like "am" but before verbs like "run"!
I hope you enjoy your classes and have a good semester :)
2018年9月25日
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