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Hannah
Could you check my sentences in English??
Yesterday the shower curtain rail dropped all of sudden when I finished take a bath.
Because when I opened the shower curtain, I pulled it too strong ...And then the shower curtain rail hit me! It really hurt.... Next bath time I have to pull it very kindly:/
I had a dog in Japan. He was my pretty brother and my precious. But around 1 month ago he passed away. When he went to a paradise for dogs, I couldn’t say goodbye to him. Because then I already stay in the UK. About 4 months ago, suddenly we knew he had a kidney disease. However then I already decided to leave Japan soon.But before I left Japan, I really thought whether or not to leave Japan. Although I made a decision to leave my country. So until I went to here, I took care of him every day every time. And I left Japan. I don’t know much my decision is correct or wrong even though I just hope he rests peacefully in heaven....
2018年9月28日 03:01
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Could you check my sentences in English??
Yesterday the shower curtain rod dropped all of sudden when I finished take a bath.Because When I opened the shower curtain, I pulled it too strong ...And then the shower curtain rod hit me! It really hurt. Next bath time, I have to pull it very gently:/
I had a dog in Japan. *1He was my pretty brother and my precious. But around 1 month ago he passed away. When he went to a paradise for dogs, I couldn’t say goodbye to him because then I was already stay in the UK. About 4 months ago, suddenly we suddenly knew found out he had a kidney disease. However, then at that time I had already decided to leave Japan soon. But Before I left Japan, I really thought about whether or not I should leave Japan. Although I had already made a decision to leave my country. So until I went to came here, I took care of him all the time, every day every time. And I left Japan. I don’t know whether my decision was right or wrong, even though I just hope he rests peacefully in heaven....
*1 - 意味がちょっとわかりません。あなたは犬が兄弟のようにという意味ですか？
2018年9月28日
Yesterday the shower curtain rod dropped all of sudden when I finished taking a bath. Because when I opened the shower curtain, I pulled it too strong ...And then the shower curtain rod hit me! It really hurt.... Next time I have to pull it very gently:/ I had a dog in Japan. He was my pretty brother and my precious. But around 1 month ago he passed away. He went to a paradise for dogs and i never had the chance to say goodbye to him. Because by the time he died, I was already living in the UK. About 4 months ago, i was home in Japan when we were surprised to discover he had kidney disease. However, by then I had already decided to leave Japan for the UK. Before I left, I really thought whether or not to leave. Although I made a decision to leave my country. So until I left Japan, I took care of him all day long, each day. I don’t know whether my decision was right or wrong, I just hope he rests peacefully in heaven....
2018年9月28日
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