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Lantern Festival Customs Today is the Lantern Festival in China. Lantern Festival is the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar calendar every year. The Lantern Festival has the following customs: 1. Eat Tangyuan. Tangyuan has meat filling, sesame filling and so on. 2. Attend the lantern show. In some scenic spots, light exhibitions are usually held, such as the city temple in Shanghai. There will be all kinds of beautiful lanterns. Some lights also have riddles on them for tourists to play with. 3. Making lanterns for children. The children will come together with lanterns in their hands to set off fireworks. The elders said that on Lantern Festival day if children shine lanterns in their eyes, it will mean that their eyes will not get sick all year round. 4. Set off fireworks. The fireworks will blossom everywhere,which will makes the Lantern Festival night looks more beautiful.
2019年2月19日 01:15
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Lantern Festival Customs

Today is the Lantern Festival in China. Lantern Festival is on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar calendar every year. The Lantern Festival has the following customs:

1. Eat Tangyuan. Tangyuan has meat filling, sesame filling and so on.

2. Attend the lantern show. In some scenic spots, light exhibitions are usually held, such as the city temple in Shanghai. There will be all kinds of beautiful lanterns. Some lights also have riddles on them for tourists to play with.


3. Making lanterns for children. The Children will come together with lanterns in their hands to set off fireworks. The elders said say that on Lantern Festival day, if children were to shine lanterns in their eyes, it will mean that their eyes will not get sick they will not get eye problems all year round. (does not sound right to say "eyes will get sick" or "eyes will not get sick". )


4. Set off fireworks. The fireworks will blossom be set off everywhere,which will makes the Lantern Festival night look s more truly beautiful (or spectacular). (I think it is okay to say "fireworks will bloom everywhere ..." . It does sound nice to me but it is not very common in English. How will you say this in Chinese ?).

You wrote very well, only a few mistakes. 
但是我还是不这道tangyuan是什么呢 :-)?是一种饺子,一种甜品还是一种汤?请你可以在评论中用英文解释一下吗?

2019年2月20日
Today is the Lantern Festival in China. Lantern Festival is the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar calendar every year. The Lantern Festival has the following customs: 1. Eat Tangyuan. Tangyuan has meat filling, sesame filling and so on. 2. Attend the lantern show. In some scenic spots, light exhibitions are usually held, such as the city temple in Shanghai. There will be all kinds of beautiful lanterns. Some lights also have riddles on them for tourists to play with. 3. Making lanterns for children. The children came together with lanterns in their hands to set off fireworks. The elders said that on Lantern Festival day if children shine lanterns in their eyes, it will mean that their eyes will not get sick all year round. 4. Set off fireworks. Beautiful fireworks bloom everywhere to make the Lantern Festival night look more beautiful.
2019年2月19日
The fireworks bloom everywhere makes the Lantern Festival night look more beautiful. This sentence I wanted to write like this “The fireworks bloom everywhere makes the Lantern Festival night looked more beautiful. ” I searched the Internet and the information on the Internet suggested that the word "look" is a Linking Verb. All Linking Verb has no passive voice. I can't understand why there is the grammar of Linking verbs.
2019年2月19日
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