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About traditional Chinese medical science One night at the end of September 2018, my daughter started snoring and opened her mouth to breathe at night. We took her to the doctor and found that she had adenoid hypertrophy. Because the nostrils are blocked by about 70%, experts from Shanghai Xinhua Hospital and Shanghai Ninth People's Hospital (both of which are well-known hospitals in Shanghai) suggested that we remove adenoids by surgery. I searched a lot of information about adenoidal hypertrophy on the Internet and found that the incidence of adenoid hypertrophy is high, but only a few people have accompanying symptoms, and my daughter's developmental index is very good, so I did not accept the doctor's advice. We took our daughter to see a specialist in traditional Chinese medicine, and then our daughter took the traditional Chinese medicine. Now my daughter has totally recovered. Sometimes I think doctors rely too much on surgery when treating diseases. This can have a negative impact on the body. I hope that traditional Chinese medicine can develop more and more scientifically to make up for the shortcomings of Western medicine. 在2018年9月底的一个晚上,我的女儿开始在睡眠时打鼾并且张嘴呼吸。我们带她去看医生,发现她患有腺样体肥大。 由于鼻孔堵塞了约70%,上海新华医院和上海第九人民医院(均为上海知名医院)的专家建议我们通过手术切除腺样体。 我在互联网上搜索了很多关于腺样体肥大的信息,发现腺样体肥大的发生率很高,但出现伴随的症状的人群数量其实很少,而且我女儿的发育指数都很好,所以我没有接受医生的建议。 我们带女儿去看中医专家,然后我们的女儿服用了中药。现在我的女儿完全康复了。 有时我认为现代医学在治疗疾病时过分依赖手术,但这会对身体产生负面影响。我希望中医能够发展得越来越科学,以弥补西医的不足。
2019年2月26日 00:46
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About traditional Chinese medical science

One night at the end of September 2018, my daughter started snoring and opened her mouth to breathe at night. We took her to the doctor and found that she had adenoid hypertrophy.
Because the her nostrils are were blocked by about 70%, experts from Shanghai Xinhua Hospital and Shanghai Ninth People's Hospital (both of which are well-known hospitals in Shanghai) suggested (advised is better) that we remove the adenoids by surgery surgically. (or "advised that we surgically remove the adenoids" both ways okay)

I searched a lot of information about (its ok but better to say : I did a lot of research on ...) adenoidal hypertrophy on the Internet and found that the incidence of adenoid hypertrophy is high, but only a few people have accompanying symptoms, and my daughter's developmental index is very good, so I did not accept the doctor's advice. (or did not accept the doctors diagnosis)  

We took our daughter to see a specialist in traditional Chinese medicine, and then our daughter took the traditional Chinese medicine. Now my daughter has now totally recovered.
Sometimes I think doctors rely too much on surgery when treating diseases. This can have a negative impact on the body.

I hope that traditional Chinese medicine can develop more and more scientifically to make up for the shortcomings of Western medicine.

Very well written Dora, only a few minor changes. I will study how you wrote it in Chinese :) 

在2018年9月底的一个晚上,我的女儿开始在睡眠时打鼾并且张嘴呼吸。我们带她去看医生,发现她患有腺样体肥大。
由于鼻孔堵塞了约70%,上海新华医院和上海第九人民医院(均为上海知名医院)的专家建议我们通过手术切除腺样体。
我在互联网上搜索了很多关于腺样体肥大的信息,发现腺样体肥大的发生率很高,但出现伴随的症状的人群数量其实很少,而且我女儿的发育指数都很好,所以我没有接受医生的建议。
我们带女儿去看中医专家,然后我们的女儿服用了中药。现在我的女儿完全康复了。
有时我认为现代医学在治疗疾病时过分依赖手术,但这会对身体产生负面影响。我希望中医能够发展得越来越科学,以弥补西医的不足。

2019年2月26日
I'm glad you decided not to proceed with the surgery in the end. We have to do our own research too and not just blindly follow their advise.
2019年2月28日
Yes, you are quite right Dora, advise is the strongest or most formal. Advise is normally used when the person giving the advise specialises, has more experience or has given a lot of thought/study on the topic. It can also be used for example for parents (wiser) giving advise to children. But less common for children to be giving advise to parents on life matters unless maybe it is the child's area of speciality. It is common for children to be giving suggestions and recommendation to parents for more casual, light-hearted things like music, movies, food etc. see : https://www.englishpractice.com/words/recommend-suggest-advise/
2019年2月28日
Advise is the most formal and is used with subjects like doctor, teacher, counselor, government official , etc. Suggest is more informal and is used to express an idea or opinion.Recommend is more personal and is used when the speaker is giving a suggestion based on personal experience.
2019年2月28日
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