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Proposal (Public transport) Introduction The aims of this proposal are to highlight the current problems with public transport and give ideas for improving the service for local residents. Current Situation A number of concerns with regard to the number of buses were expressed by citizens. They admit it is tough to get on the bus in early hours, because public transport is overcrowded. In addition, the traffic network is not developed properly causing inconvenience for those living far from city centre. Rude behaviour of drivers is one more serious problem causing passengers’ frustration. Suggestions The new units of transport are to be purchased and distributed according to the rush hour. In this way there will be no need to waste time waiting for an empty bus. Moreover, in this way the workplaces for drivers will be increased as well. At the same time there should be arranged the strict measures in order to prevent cases of inappropriate actions of drivers. It can be provided in a form of penalty or, if the situation becomes worse, up to employment termination. Final Recommendations I am looking forward to your positive decision about applying my proposals. If these recommendations are implemented, the current undesirable situation with public transport is bound to improve.
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Introduction
The aims of this proposal are to highlight the current problems with public bus transportation and give ideas for improving the service for local residents.

Current Situation
Citizens expressed a number of concerns regarding the number of buses. They admit it is difficult to get on the bus in early hours because public transportation is overcrowded. In addition, the traffic network is not fully-developed, causing inconvenience for those living far from the city centre. Rude behaviour of bus drivers is one more serious problem causing passengers’ frustration.

Suggestions
The new buses are to be purchased and distributed  to alleviate problems during rush hour so that passengers will not waste time waiting for an open bus.  Additional bus driver jobs will also be created.

Bus drivers and passengers should experience less frustration, leading to less incident reports.  If incident reports continue at the current rate, current policies regarding courteous treatment of passengers will be adjusted.

Final Recommendations
I am looking forward to your comments regarding this proposal. If these recommendations are implemented, the current public opinion regarding  bussing issues will certainly improve.



Note:. Trying not to offend a public figure by saying that their current management of a public work is insufficient or weak.  In addition, usually when a proposal is submitted, there is a suggestion regarding the payment for an expensive solution to a public problem.
2019年5月22日
Introduction
The aims of this proposal are to highlight the current problems with public bus transportation and give ideas for improving the service for local residents.

Current Situation
Citizens expressed a number of concerns regarding the number of buses. They admit it is difficult to get on the bus in early hours because public transportation is overcrowded. In addition, the traffic network is not fully-developed, causing inconvenience for those living far from the city centre. Rude behaviour of bus drivers is one more serious problem causing passengers’ frustration.

Suggestions
The new buses are to be purchased and distributed  to alleviate problems during rush hour so that passengers will not waste time waiting for an open bus.  Additional bus driver jobs will also be created.

Bus drivers and passengers should experience less frustration, leading to less incident reports.  If incident reports continue at the current rate, current policies regarding courteous treatment of passengers will be adjusted.

Final Recommendations
I am looking forward to your comments regarding this proposal. If these recommendations are implemented, the current public opinion regarding  bussing issues will certainly improve.



Note:. Trying not to offend a public figure by saying that their current management of a public work is insufficient or weak.  In addition, usually when a proposal is submitted, there is a suggestion regarding the payment for an expensive solution to a public problem.
2019年5月22日
Introduction
The aims of this proposal are to highlight the current problems with public transportation and give ideas for improving the service for local residents.

Current Situation
A number of concerns with regard to the number of buses were expressed by citizens. They admit it is tough to get on the bus in early hours, because public transport is overcrowded. In addition, the traffic network is not developed properly causing inconvenience for those living far from city centre. Rude behaviour of drivers is one more serious problem causing passengers’ frustration.

Suggestions
The new units of transport are to be purchased and distributed according to the rush hour. In this way there will be no need to waste time waiting for an empty bus. Moreover, in this way the workplaces for drivers will be increased as well. At the same time there should be arranged the strict measures in order to prevent cases of inappropriate actions of drivers. It can be provided in a form of penalty or, if the situation becomes worse, up to employment termination.

Final Recommendations
I am looking forward to your positive decision about applying my proposals. If these recommendations are implemented, the current undesirable situation with public transport is bound to improve.
2019年5月22日
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