The Stranger. Part 2.To the far away lands... Please, correct my mistakes.
This time I write from Damien person. i try to write the difficult text (for my English level). I hope this is not a shame...
The time was going. My staying at the Druid's Island in the parallel warld was hard and joyful together. I went on to train. At the beginning I just ran to the valey and raised stones there. Sometimes I took swimming after the training. I dreamed to join warriors, but Lisa didn't allow me to do it till I became harder. Even Lisa was more tough and endure than me so I will be faced with the long way before I'll join the real warriors. The interesting difference of these people from us was their power. Many of them were as tough as professional sportsmen in our world.
One day when Lisa joined me to run to the Lake she told me:
"Elders prepare an expedition to unknown continents. Our ships will sail through the ocean. You can join the expedition if you complete your harvesting work on time."
Sure my answer depended on whether would Lisa join the expedition or not. I fell in love since long time ago...
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The Stranger. Part 2.To the far away lands... Please, correct my mistakes.This time I write from Damien's point of view person. Ii try tried to write the a more difficult text (for my English level). I hope this is not a mistake shame...
"The Elders prepare (are preparing) an expedition to unknown continents. Our ships will sail across through the oceans. You can join the expedition if you complete your harvesting work on time."
Sure Of course my answer depended on whether would Lisa would join the expedition or not. I fell in love with her a since long time ago...
An interesting story, and well done for trying something harder than you would normally:)
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The Stranger. Part 2.To the far away lands... Please, correct my mistakes.
This time I write as the Damien person. I am trying to write difficult text (for my English level). I hope this is not bad...The time was passing. My stay at the Druid's Island in the parallel world was both hard and joyful. I went onto the train. At the beginning I just ran to the valley and raised stones there. Sometimes I took swimming after the training. I dreamed of joining the warriors, but Lisa didn't allow me to do it until I became harder. Even Lisa was tougher and endured more than I. So I will be faced with a long way before I can join the real warriors. The interesting difference between these people and us was their power. Many of them were as tough as professional sportsmen in our world.
One day when Lisa joined me to run to the Lake she told me,
"The Elders are preparing an expedition to unknown continents. Our ships will sail through the ocean. You can join the expedition if you complete your harvesting work on time."
Surely my answer depended on whether Lisa would join the expedition or not. I fell in love a long time ago...
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