Today, I will go to Shibuya with my friend after university. Before that, I will buy a Shinkansen ticket for tomorrow. I will go home early because I have to get up early tomorrow. After university tomorrow, I will go to Hyogo. I will go to my favorite singer Aimyon’s concert. I am very excited and can’t wait for it.
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Today, I will go to Shibuya with my friend after university. Before that, I will buy a Shinkansen ticket for tomorrow. I will go home early because I have to get up early tomorrow. After university tomorrow, I will go to Hyogo. I will go to my favourite singer Aimyon’s concert. I am very excited and can’t wait for it.
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Your writing is clear, natural, and easy to follow. The sequence of events is well organised, and only a minor spelling change was needed for British English. Keep up the excellent work!🌸
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