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I'm going to advertise my hometown as a tourist destination. Please help me with this video script. It's very important. I don't want to make any mistake. Please correct the grammatical error. It'd be better if you could help refine it, make it sound natural and native. Many thanks! _________________________________________________________ Hi, there! Welcome to YICHUN I’m your tour guide today! I was born and raised here. So in this video, I’ll show you the top 10 things to do in YICHUN. Yichun City ( Heilongjiang province) China, is known nationally as China’s largest forest capital. Located in the northeast of China, about 2 hours from Harbin by bullet train, it is a fascinating city to add to your China itinerary. No.1 As night falls on the snow village, the village is totally covered in snow and fairytale-like scenery awaits. Lanterns with Chinese characteristics give off warm light, kids dance their fireworks, and brilliant fireworks explode into the sky. No. 2 As a gourmet, I’m pretty sure chicken stewed mushrooms will satisfy your taste. It is the most representative Northeastern Cuisine. All the ingredients come from nature. You will be warmly welcomed by the simple local farmers. No.3 Yu hot springs is a relaxing getaway, where you can soak in a continuous flow of World Famous Natural Hot Mineral Water. No. 4 There are loads of ways to play with snow, building a snowman, sliding down a snowy slope, throwing hot water in air it will turn into ice crystals…. The ice and snow park is full of screams and laughter. No. 5 Breathe the fresh air, take some exercise, and get a good sweat on. Cycling, skating, hiking through the winter forests and skiing are really chilly experience. No. 6 Oh, yes. Don’t forget to buy some sophisticated local artefacts as gifts for your family and friends.
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I'm going to advertise my hometown as a tourist destination. Please help me with this video script. It's very important. I don't want to make any mistake. Please correct the grammatical error. It'd be better if you could help refine it, make it sound natural and native. Many thanks! _________________________________________________________ Hi, there! Welcome to YICHUN I’m your tour guide today! I was born and raised here. So in this video, I’ll show you the top 10 things to do in YICHUN. Yichun City ( Heilongjiang province) China, is known nationally as China’s largest forest capital. Located in the northeast of China, about 2 hours from Harbin by bullet train, it is a fascinating city to add to your China itinerary. No.1 As night falls, the village is totally covered in snow and fairytale-like scenery awaits. Lanterns with Chinese characteristics give off warm light, kids play with their sparklers, and brilliant fireworks explode into the sky. No. 2 As a gourmet, I’m pretty sure chicken stewed mushrooms will satisfy your taste. It is the most representative Northeastern Cuisine. All the ingredients come from nature. You will be warmly welcomed by the simple local farmers. No.3 Yu hot springs is a relaxing getaway, where you can soak in a continuous flow of World Famous Natural Hot Mineral Water. No. 4 There are loads of ways to play with snow, building a snowman, sliding down a snowy slope, throwing hot water in the air so it turns into ice crystals…. The ice and snow park is full of screams and laughter. No. 5 Breathe the fresh air, take some exercise, and get a good sweat on. Cycling, skating, hiking through the winter forests and skiing are a really chilly (you mean it's cold? Or do you mean relaxing?) experience. No. 6 Oh, yes. Don’t forget to buy some sophisticated local artefacts as gifts for your family and friends.
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