Mari Kim
You can see many celebrities living in Jeju Island these days. Not only entertainment days but also ordinary people prefer to live in Jeju Island. I think most people moving to Jeju Island are probably tired of the fast-paced urban environment or life in cities that would wear people down quickly. Once, I talked with my husband about living in a quiet countryside such as Jeju Island. My husband said that if you live in the countryside, we can be very easily in a nature and get away from the daily grind, but you have to be diligent. This is because when I live in an apartment in Seoul, my apartment wound take care of a lot things, but when I started living in the house in the countryside, I had to do all with my own hands. In conclusion, I don't think I can live in the countryside. I like to stay still and enjoy nature, but I can't clean the yard, grow plants, and take care of household chores every day. I also have to keep dangerous situations at bay and focus more on housework. Could you plase make my draft sound more natural? I want to use an expression "keep something at bay" in my draft. If using " keep dangerous situations at bay" doesn't make sense, could you correct it? Thank you for your time and your help.
2022年1月13日 11:42
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You can see many celebrities living on Jeju Island these days. Not only entertainers but also ordinary people are now preferring to live on Jeju Island. I think most people that move to Jeju Island are probably tired of the fast-paced urban environment or life in cities that would wear people down quickly. Once, I spoke with my husband about living in the quiet countryside, such as Jeju Island. My husband said when you live in the countryside, you can be in nature very easily and get away from the daily grind, but you have to be diligent. This is because living in an apartment in Seoul is different, my apartment is modern and self sufficient but when you start living in a house in the countryside, you have to do everything with your own hands. In conclusion, I don't think I can live in the countryside. I would like to stay still and enjoy nature, but I can't clean the yard, grow plants, and take care of household chores every day. I would also have to keep dangerous situations at bay so l can focus more on housework. Could you plase make my draft sound more natural? I want to use an expression "keep something at bay" in my draft. If using " keep dangerous situations at bay" doesn't make sense, could you correct it? Thank you for your time and your help.
2022年1月13日
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