Hello everyone i have tried to write a little song. can you tell me is there any grammatical error? ? Thank you very much!

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In a world so vast, where meaning seems lost
Question: existence. The ultimate cost

Born into this chaos, mere side effect
The power to make our lives connect
Born into this chaos, side effect

Puzzle incomplete

We wander through the shadows, searching for light
In the depths of our souls, we ignite (we ignite)

Life's true beauty lies in the journey we tread

But we hold the power to make our lives connect.
Life, a puzzle incomplete.
Find the missing pieces, make it sweet.
No purpose by default,
it's up to you and me to give it meaning. Spirits free.
A Puzzle incomplete

Question

Hello everyone i have tried to write a little song. can you tell me is there any grammatical error? ? Thank you very much!

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In a world so vast, where meaning seems lost
Question: existence. The ultimate cost

Born into this chaos, mere side effect
The power to make our lives connect
Born into this chaos, side effect

Puzzle incomplete
 
We wander through the shadows, searching for light
In the depths of our souls, we ignite (we ignite)

Life's true beauty lies in the journey we tread

But we hold the power to make our lives connect. 
Life, a puzzle incomplete.
Find the missing pieces, make it sweet.
No purpose by default, 
it's up to you and me to give it meaning. Spirits free.
A Puzzle incomplete

Answer

How lovely that you’ve written a song, thanks for sharing it. Since you have artistic license with lyrics, I can’t tell you that the sentences are incomplete because it’s poetic. I don’t see any grammatical errors though, congratulations!

￼Only two small errors in your ￼ opening question: ￼…￼ can you tell me if there are any errors…(are/errors)

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