It is my IELTS Writing task 1:" The bar charts illustrate the average time people spent working weekly in the industrial sector, in four different European countries (France, Denmark, Sweden and the UK) in 2002. (If you say ‘including’ it suggests there are other countries) Overall, the percentages of employees spending between 36 and 40 hours at work were the highest in all given countries, except for France where the most was 31-35 hours. Looking at the figures in more detail, regarding France, half of French employees work for 31-35 hours weekly, followed by those working for 36-40 hours, at approximately 36 %. The proportion of people working for 46-50 hours per week was 20%, which was nearly twice as high as the figure in other categories. Turning to the remaining countries, for Sweden and the UK, the proportions of workers doing 36-40 hours were 80% and 50% respectively. The figures for British people working for 40+ hours were significantly higher than those for Swedish people. The rest generally fell into the 1-35 hour range in both countries. Finally, Denmark witnessed the highest proportion of industrial employees spending 36-40 hours on work, comprising 70% (70% isn’t bigger than 80%) Nearly 10% were included in each of the remaining hour ranges, except for the case of 31-35 hours where the figure was around 25%.