What I am proud of in the culture of the land of Persia is the historical background of my country and the first human rights charter in the world that was presented to humanity by the great Cyrus.

amin m.n

2021年9月23日 07:31

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I am proud of the historical background of my country, Persia. Furthermore, we developed the first human rights charter in the world that was presented to humanity by the great Cyrus.

Hey Amin We can simplify the sentences as such! Hope this helps :)

2021年9月23日

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