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Yafa Meshal
First i brush my teeth and wash my face before going to bed. Then i put on my pajamas and turn off the lights. By the time I lie down, i already feel relaxed and sleepy. Next i close my eyes and think of something peaceful. Last i fall asleep and dream about happy things.
Please may you correct my writing.
2025年10月4日 15:00
解答 · 1
First, I brush my teeth and wash my face before going to bed. Then, I put on my pajamas [or "pyjamas" in the U.K.] and turn off the lights. By the time I lie down, I already feel relaxed and sleepy. Next, I close my eyes and think of something peaceful. Last, I fall asleep and dream about happy things. [Using "Last" here is kind of awkward. I would instead say, "Finally, I fall asleep..."]
Pretty much perfect! Just remember to use a comma to separate subordinate clauses and remember that "I" is always capitalized.
2025年10月5日
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