Three weeks ago, I performed in a dance show at my university festival. It was a really fun and exciting experience because many people came to watch our performance. I felt a little nervous before going on stage, but once the music started I forgot about my worries and enjoyed dancing with my teammates/classmates. Right after the festival ended, our dance club started practicing for another event. It's for our Christmas party. At the party, each dance team will perform a special number, and there will also be dance battles/competitions and exchanging presents. I decided to join five different dance numbers for this event. That means I have a lot of practice sessions every day, and sometimes it’s hard to balance school, my part-time job, and dance practice. Even though it’s tiring, I’m really looking forward to it. I think it will be a great chance to make good memories with my friends and improve my dancing skills. I can’t wait for the Christmas party. Well done. This is a really good piece of English writing. I’m really impressed. Keep it up. And happy dancing! Teacher Simon