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mansi bhatt

I feel sleepy 💤 now - a- days because I'm doing night shifts so I used to get easily tired this is my first experience before i wasn't not so busy. So I don't get enough time to spend with my family .

2021年6月6日 11:23

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I feel sleepy 💤 now - a- days because I'm doing night shifts so I feel tired alot. This is my first experience of shift work and before i wasn't so busy. I also don't get enough time to spend with my family .

You need to be careful with punctuation and break up your sentences as it's difficult to read a long sentence with no commas

2021年6月6日

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