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Correction of text “Ray Systems” Company established in 2009 in Baku. The company's main activity is to provide integration of web services, computer technology services via information technology services to technical business solutions and TV area. Our company is offering technology solutions for TV companies of Azerbaijan Republic. Our main goal is to provide customers with product and services which is surrounded by the light of International Standards . • Section of the web design includes these services: - Technical services of the computers and their equipments - Creating networks - Consulting about the information technologies • Section of the system integration is realize using of world company’s equipments in practice of business and TV Projects which we distributes. “Ray Systems” is provide equipment trade of Sony, Panasonic, Fujifilm, Canon, Everts, Sennheiser, TVLogic and others since 2010. Can anyone help me in correction of this text?

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thank you so much israelphoenix!
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I'm not sure where Baku is. If it is inside a country I would name the country after it. generally in a list the first word is not capitalized but it can go either way.
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“Ray Systems” Company was established in (a month would be good here like December) 2009 in Baku. The company's main activity is to provide the integration of web services, computer technology services via information technology services to technical business solutions, and TV area( if you can leave area off it would be better). Our company is offering technology solutions for TV companies of the Azerbaijan Republic. Our main goal is to provide customers with products and services which are guaranteed by International Standards . • Section of the web design includes these services: - Technical services of the computers and their equipment(s) Leave the "s" off. - Creating networks - Consulting (would consultation be better?) about information technologies • Section of the system integration is realized using world company’s equipment in the practice of business and TV Projects which we distribute. (This is a choppy sentence, rewrite it.) “Ray Systems” provides equipment trade of Sony, Panasonic, Fujifilm, Canon, Everts, Sennheiser, TVLogic and others since (December or whatever month it started), 2010. Additional Details: Can anyone help me in correction of this text? Translate » ( These type corrections are generally posted on notebook : )
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I mean, I need a help.
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This is not a question.

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