When I go to school, I see everyone around me smokes. It is startling that my classmates, friends, supervisors, and also my teachers--people expected to be good role models, are engaging in such a dangerous habit. It disgusts me to see their behavior. Do they not realize they are killing themselves by smoking cigarettes? I decided to do some research on the influence of tobacco on human health. Maybe my findings will help those who are slaves to this poison. (Is this part of a bigger project?) If this is part of an essay, unless it is a narrative essay, the use of first person (I) is not usually allowed (unless your teacher has approved its usage. Academic papers are usually written in third person (except the narrative. You may want to take this into consideration.)

Hello everyone : ) Please can you help me to write the introduction of my paragraph ? (pleasse correct <MY> faults and if you've <ANY OTHER> Ideas I'm all ear ;] ) When I go to <THE> school I see everyBODY <SMOKING> around me , starting with my classmates, friends, supervisors and also teachers who <CAN> to be the example,.... <IT IS DISGUSTING> to see that they kill themselves with a small fire, So I decideD to do this modest work to find out the effects of tobacco , and I do hope that it will help (even if it's for a little bit) those who are slaves of this poison . PS: <MY ENGLISH LEVEL IS NOT HIGH> , I'm not a native speaker,,,