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Seth
I'm writing a resume. Can anyone help me to check ou this sentence?
a. Pre-sale customer service experiences in a store of tmall selling household appliances.
b. Pre-sale customer service experiences in a store, selling household appliances, of tmall.
Which way to say it is better? Or the other way.
2014年4月21日 01:48
解答 · 2
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What is tmall?
Pre-sale customer service experience in a store, selling household appliances. This is OK and correct except I removed the s from experience, experiences is OK but indicates you had many different experiences instead of just stating you have experience, one type, that of customer service.
. Pre-sale customer service experience in a household appliance store. This is probably a better sentence as it says the same thing but is more concise.
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