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In May Last year, an accident occured that a man in 20s was electrocuted as he got up on a freight train stopped at the XXX station in line 1.
If there's anything awkward or wrong, please correct me :)
2015年8月30日 09:43
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In May Last year, an accident occurred in which a man in his 20s was electrocuted as he got up on to a freight train which had stopped at the XXX station in line 1.
2015年8月30日
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