Hamza
please, correct this phrase ? there are the times where we feel it's the end, then we discover it's the start, and there are the doors where we feel it' shut, then we discover it's the real gateway
2015年9月2日 00:22
解答 · 8
As Peachey said- capitalise it, and check the punctuation. I think it would be better as two sentences. You should take out the first 'the's (of each phrase) - 'times' and 'doors' are not specific. And as I said - 'feel' does not really go with 'shut'. You can see if a door is shut or not. Have a think about other analogies that might fit?
2015年9月2日
e.g. your analogy suggests using 'feel' a door is shut, but that doesn't really make sense. The more obvious word is 'think'.
2015年9月2日
Corrections-wise, Peachey is correct. Mostly it is fine other than that. But there are a few odd word choices - which are more personal preference.
2015年9月2日
Check the punctuation and capital letters. These are important.
2015年9月2日
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