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Lily
Could you help me to check whether this sentence is grammatically correct?
I went for a walk with my friends, we stopped to take some photos, but I had been stealing backpack that you had lent me.
2016年5月12日 16:37
解答 · 6
"but I had been stealing backpack that you had lent me" What is this,makes no sense,sorry.
Cannot correct it if I dont know what your trying to say.
2016年5月12日
I went for a walk with my friends, and we stopped to take some photos. I would add an "and".
The last part is not clear. If she lent you the backpack, then you did not steal it. I think you need to think again about the words "lend" and "steal". Also, the last part seems very different from the first two parts, so I would put it in a different sentence.
2016年5月12日
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2016年5月12日
The last part of the sentence is incorrect, and I'm not sure what do you want to say here so I could think something that you want to say, maybe: but I had been stealing "the" backpack that you had lent me. Here, you did not add the definite article in front of backpack.
2016年5月12日
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