Calla Lily
It's a fast and convenience approach to connect with people.
Hi there, Could you please review this to see if it makes sense?
1. I usually write by email because it's a fast and convenience approach to connect with people.
2. But, If it's time for an important event, or for an elderly people to show my appreciation, I think handwriting in person is a better way.
3. According to my occupation, I usually write with a computer.
4. Sometimes I write stories or diaries. It's been a long time that I haven't made new poems.
5. Almost every day I listen to music, it brings me a vital and relaxing feeling in the night.
Thank you so much for your kindness!
2017年2月8日 06:59
解答 · 8
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1. I usually write emails because it's a fast and convenience approach to connect with people.
2. However, when it comes to an important event, or to show my appreciation for the elderly , I think handwriting a letter is a better way.
3. According to my occupation, I usually write with a computer.
4. Sometimes I write stories or diary entries but it has been a long time since I wrote any new poems.
5. Almost daily I listen to music, it relaxes me and gives me a feeling of vitality at night."
I hope this helps
Casey
2017年2月8日
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For number 5, it's more natural to put 'almost every day' after the verb and complement. "I listen to music almost every day,..."
2017年2月8日
Hi Bramwell, Many thanks for your caring.
1. ya, you're right, "convenient" approach.
2. May I say this sentence below?
According to my occupation is related the field of computer, so I usually write with a computer.
2017年2月8日
3. In my job ( or work)...'According to' does not really make any sense here.
2017年2月8日
Convenient, not convenience. Convenient is the adjective, convenience is a noun.
2017年2月8日
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