for exercise I write a review about one restaurant, I would be happy if someone could correct it
ASUKA

Asuka Pisa is part of Asuka chain restaurants, it is placed in the periphery of Pisa, back the MediaWorld, it’s simple to find. It is a Chinese and Japanese restaurant, and it was the first time that I had tried this kind of food.
I went there with my girlfriend at lunch, we arrived and the waitress brought us to our table. The dishes passed near the table on the conveyor belt, I found it fantastic, with this mechanism you can take what you see on it when you want, it’s a smart Idea. I’ve tried sushi, it was exceptional, I love it.
The restaurant in general are modern and colourful, it looks attractive and original. I’ve paid only 30 euro and we could eat whatever we want, I felt full and satisfying about all. I think I come back with my friends there, with “all you can eat” we will be feeling like home.I would recommend Asuka to everyone who want eat a lot of delicious dishes, with this price you had to try it at least once.

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for exercise I  write a review about one restaurant,  I would be happy if someone could correct it
ASUKA

Asuka Pisa is part of Asuka chain restaurants, it is placed in the periphery of Pisa, back the MediaWorld, it’s simple to find. It is a Chinese and Japanese restaurant, and it was the first time that I had tried this kind of food.
 I went there with my girlfriend at lunch, we arrived and the waitress brought us to our table. The dishes passed near the table on the conveyor belt, I found it fantastic, with this mechanism you can take what you see on it when you want, it’s a smart Idea. I’ve tried sushi, it was exceptional, I love it.
The restaurant in general are modern and colourful, it looks attractive and original. I’ve paid only 30 euro and we could eat whatever we want, I felt full and satisfying about all. I think I come back with my friends there, with “all you can eat” we will be feeling like home.I would recommend Asuka to everyone who want eat a lot of delicious dishes, with this price you had to try it at least once.

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Hola Giovani, If you post this again as a 'Notebook/Cuaderno/Diario' entry it will de easier to correct it, highlighting the changes for you to see easily. ¡Saludos!

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You're welcome. Your understanding and use of English is excellent - Well done :-)

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thank you very much David

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Asuka Pisa is part of the Asuka chain restaurant. It is placed in the periphery of Pisa, behind MediaWorld and is simple to find. It is a Chinese/Japanese restaurant, and it was the first time that I have tried this kind of food.
I went there with my girlfriend for lunch. We arrived and the waitress brought us to our table. The dishes passed by the table on a conveyor belt which I found fantastic. With this mechanism you can take what you see on it whenever you want, it’s a smart Idea. I tried sushi and it was exceptional, I loved it.
The restaurant in general is modern and colourful and looks attractive and original. For just 30 euro, we could eat whatever we liked. I felt full and satisfied with everything. I think I will come back with my friends and with the “all you can eat” option, it will feel like home.I recommend Asuka to everyone who wants to eat a lot of delicious dishes and for the price, you have to try it at least once.