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Linh
can you correct a paragraph to me,thanks :)
I wasn't exist behind your eyes
You never have not seen me at every dawn
Blessing for you , beside you during a long way
Perhaps you're dreaming about rapturous with someone
Living your real life ,I will not your trouble
Dont take care of what people say
Cuz Im nothing in your eyes
Laterly If you stil listen my love songs , it is stil sweety and softly as a first days
There isn't any chorus continue forever
This life do not pay money for your acting so you needn't act like a actress
I realize your change by myself and loving isn't fairy tale
although Im nothing ,Im also in love with you untill the last minutes
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2017年4月24日 06:59
解答 · 2
Your text has several grammar mistakes and the content is poetic. This makes it hard to understand your meaning. It could take quite a long time to work with you on this particular text to get it right. This is probably why you haven't had any answers. I suggest that you ask us for help on your sentences about simpler everyday topics. If you write a paragraph for correction, use Notebook.
2017年4月24日
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