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How to make a final statement from two opposite view as below? First side Reading: The national Geographic part put together a committee and they concluded that Peary's account is persuasive. Second side Lecture: In the lecture the professor explains that the committee was not objective they consist of Peary's close friends; furthermore, their investigation took only two days; Hence, their conclusion is biased. My final statement: This contradicts the passage argument about committee's conclusion. Is my final sentence clear to a native speaker?
2017年10月24日 19:26
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"This contradicts the passage argument about THE committee's conclusion." I agree with Noel that your statement is not clear enough. It's important to point out the bias found by the professor in the lecture. I would say something like this... "Although the committee found Peary's account persuasive, the professor concluded their decision was biased because the committee consisted of Peary's friends who did not spend enough time investigating." You can also say it this way... "The committee found Peary's account persuasive, however, the professor concluded their decision was biased because the committee consisted of Peary's friends who did not spend enough time investigating." (Numerous ways of stating these two points are possible.)
2017年10月25日
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Not clear enough. I would recommend saying something like: "Information presented in the professor's lecture discounts the "persuasive" conclusion reached by the committee.
2017年10月24日
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