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Krystian
Yesterday, I got up at about 9.00 and the first thing I did was have a coffee. I always have a cup of coffee after getting up. I didn’t have breakfast. I just brushed my teeth and hair, and got dressed.
After that me and my boyfriend went to the city centre, because he had to do some things. In the meantime I went to my sister and waited for him. I had second coffee.
When my boyfriend called me, I come for him and our friend, because we planned to go to another city to go shopping. We changed car, because it wasn’t me who supposed to drive a car.
When we arrived to the city, we spent a lot of money. We bought some halloween decorates for home and ate something. We came back at about 10.00 in the evening. I was very tired. We just had a shower and went to bed.
Can you correct this? Thank you in advance!
2024年10月13日 15:37
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Yesterday, I got up at about 9.00 and the first thing I did was have a coffee. I always have a cup of coffee after getting up. I didn’t have breakfast. I just brushed my teeth and hair, and got dressed.
After that my boyfriend and I went to the city centre, because he had to do some things. In the meantime I went to my sister's place and waited for him. I had a second coffee.
When my boyfriend called me, I went to meet him and our friend, because we planned to go to another city to go shopping. We changed cars, because I wasn’t supposed to drive a car.
When we arrived in the city, we spent a lot of money. We bought some halloween decorations for home and ate something. We came back at about 10.00 in the evening. I was very tired. We just had a shower and went to bed.
Can you correct this? Thank you in advance!
Good Job, Native speaker sometimes say 'Me and someone did smtng" but it's incorrect (You would never say, "Me went to the city center")
2024年10月14日
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