Laurent Jo
If I'm postponing something now, I'll haven't done it by the time I die. So, if there's a thing I really want to do, I try not to make excuses to postpone it. Whenever I find that I'm making excuses, I think upon whether do I want it from my heart or not.
2021年10月30日 00:45
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If I'm postponing something now, I won’t have done it by the time I die. So, if
there's a thing I really want to do, I try not to make excuses to postpone it.
Whenever I find myself making excuses, I think about whether or not I want it from
my heart.
First, I really love this sentiment. Thank you for sharing. If the pandemic has taught us anything it’s not to assume tomorrow will always be there. Second, the grammar here is very good. The only thing I can’t quite figure out is that wanting it “from my heart” is not a common phrasing (at least not in American English). It’s more like, “what the heart wants” or “I listen to my heart.” But I’m not sure how to phrase it in the sentence to achieve the same meaning.
2021年10月30日
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If I'm postponing something now, I may not do it by the time I die. So, if
there's a thing I really want to do, I try not to make excuses to postpone it.
Whenever I find that I'm making excuses, I think about whether or not I want it from
my heart.
Good job! There are a few ways to say the points you make here, but the way I've changed it sounds more natural, I think.
2021年10月30日
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