Claudia
Although I’m not satisfied with my current job and have tried to find a new job, I haven't made any progress until now. No wonder everyone is complaining about how hard it is to find a job nowadays. The new term is coming soon, and more workload is to be expected. I feel so anxious that I turn to a tarot card reader for help. What she told me just made my anxiety grow even worse. Not only will I face new problems, which I have to keep learning to solve, but I should also take care of my relationship with my colleagues, since the lack of sophistication may bring me harm. It seems that life insists on being hard without an end.
2024年8月12日 14:45
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Although I’m not satisfied with my current job and have tried to find a new job, I haven't made any progress until now. No wonder everyone is complaining about how hard it is to find a job nowadays. The new term is coming soon and we expect a bigger workload as a result. I feel so anxious that I've turned to a tarot card reader for help. What she told me just worsened my anxiety. Not only will I face new problems with which I'll have to deal, but I should also take care of my relationship with my colleagues, since the lack of sophistication(?) may bring me harm. It seems that life just keep being hard on me.
I just tried to make your writing a bit more concise. I'm not sure what you mean by "lack of sophistication". Overall, I hope that your anxiety is not taking a toll on you and that you are ok, you seem a bit distressed.
2024年8月12日
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Although I’m not satisfied with my current job and have tried to find a new one, I haven't made any progress so far. No wonder everyone complains about how hard it is nowadays to find a job. The new term is near, and a bigger workload is to be expected. I felt so anxious that I turned to a tarot card reader for help. What she told me just made my anxiety grow more. Not only will I face new problems, which I'll have to keep learning how to solve, but I should also be attentive to my relationship with my colleagues, since my? lack of sophistication may bring me harm. It seems that life persists in being hard without an end. When you say "I haven't made any progress until now" it means that now you HAVE finally made progress. I don't think that's what you meant to say. Put "nowadays" (adverb) next to the word it modifies ("is"). You can't say "more workload". "Workload" looks uncountable, but it's not. You cannot use "workload" the way you would use "effort". whose lack of sophistication? Yours or your colleagues'? Instead of "the lack", say "my lack" or "their lack".
2024年8月12日
Although I’m not satisfied with my current job and have tried to find a new one, I haven't made any progress up to now. No wonder everyone is complaining about how hard it is to find a job nowadays. The new term is coming soon, and a greater workload is to be expected. I felt so anxious that I turned to a tarot card reader for help. What she told me just made my anxiety grow even worse. Not only will I face new problems, which I will have to keep learning to solve, but I should also take care of my relationship with my colleagues, since the (my/their?) lack of sophistication may bring me harm. It seems that life insists on being hard without there being an end in sight.
Good writing. Don’t worry about the card reader - they just make stuff up.
2024年8月12日
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