I suggest India to all of you who read my message. I said India because of some reasone and the reasone are - - different culture in 29state, fours parts South North East west and every where you see different food, monument and religious. For me uttrakhand is best state to travel. 😊
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I would suggest India to all of you who read my message. I suggest India because of a few reasons, some of them being that there are different cultures across the twenty nine states. Across the South, North, East and West you will see different kinds of food, monuments and religions(?). For me, Uttrakhand is the best state to travel to. 😊
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I suggest India to all of you who read my message. I said India for a few reasons, which are: there is a different culture in each of the 29 states; there are fours parts (south, north, east and west;) and every where you go you see different food, monuments and religious. For me, Uttrakhand is best state to travel to. 😊
Hope that helps. I've done the most thorough edit I can think of. Potentially ; and : are punctuation you are not familiar with, but can be useful for making lists. Let me know if you want any help with any of the corrections!
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