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In my opinion, the greatest invention in history is electricty. Also the greatest inventor in history Nicola Tesla.
2021年6月10日 06:25
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In my opinion, the greatest invention in history is electricity. Also, the greatest inventor in history is Nicola Tesla.
Notes: 'Electricity' was spelt incorrectly. If we start a sentence with 'also', we need a comma afterwards. The verb 'is' was missing from your second sentence.
2021年7月2日
In my opinion, the greatest invention in history is electricity. Also the greatest inventor in history is Nicola Tesla.
2021年6月10日
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