Ruka
My favorite childhood memory is christmas when I was 9 years old. I got a Wii.！It's TV game.🎮 And I got a Mario game software. I was really really glad!! I was addicted to the game for a while. 😂
2022年5月26日 14:26
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My favorite childhood memory is Christmas when I was 9 years old. I got a Wii! It's a video game.🎮 And I got a Mario game. I was really, really glad!! I was addicted to the game for a while. 😂
Haha, I remember when I got my Nintendo Wii also. The first game I got was "The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess". I've always been a huge Zelda fan. Overall, great job, Ruka! Just be sure to capitalize "Christmas" and be careful about some vocabulary. For example, we usually say "video game" not "TV game". Also, you don't have to say "software" with the game. We understand it's a game.
2022年5月26日
My favorite childhood memory is the Christmas when I was 9 years old. I got a Wii.！It's a TV game.🎮 And I also got a Mario game software. I was really really glad!! I had been addicted to the game for a while. 😂
2022年5月27日
My favorite childhood memory is Christmas when I was 9 years old (or you can say: the Christmas of my nine years old). I got a Wii ! It's a gaming console.🎮 And I got a Mario game. I was really really glad!! I was addicted to the game for a while. 😂
I had a Wii too and I remember playing great titles on it like Super Smash Bros, Mario Kart Zelda: The Twilight Princess, or Metroïd Prime 3: Corruption, great times. One precision: The Nintendo Wii is a gaming console which is the machine (plugged on your TV) on which you play video games. Good work otherwise. Keep it up.
2022年5月26日
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