晓晓（ Kids & Adults ）
專業教師Could you please help me correct the following sentences? Thank you in advance.
I heard two magpies chirping when I woke up this morning. In China we have a saying, which says something lucky will happen when you hear the voice of magpies.So I am looking forward to meeting beautiful things or pepole today.Maybe another nice student？I hope so.
2024年4月18日 22:31
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Could you please help me correct the following sentences? Thank you in advance.
I heard two magpies chirping when I woke up this morning. In China we have a
saying where something lucky will happen when you hear the chirping/sound of
magpies. So I am looking forward to encountering beautiful things or people
today. Maybe another nice student？I hope so.
"have a saying which says..." is correct, but a little repetitive. "Meeting people" is okay. But "meeting beautiful things" does not sound right. Maybe you translated from Chinese 遇到? Better to use the word "encountering" for "things."
2024年4月22日
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