Today, the weather is much cooler. It can be said that it is becoming autumn then winter now. I haven't run for donkey's years and now I really want to try again.

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Molly

2024年10月4日 04:07

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Today, the weather is much cooler. It can be said that it is becoming autumn then winter now. I haven't run for donkey's years and now I really want to try again. I never heard of "donkey's years" before. I do not understand your second sentence. Could you explain it to me?

2024年10月4日

Today, the weather is much cooler. It can be said that it is becoming autumn then winter now. I haven't run for donkey's years and now I really want to try again. Well done for DONKEY’S EARS! A fantastic expression! No corrections needed although ‘it can be said’ is very formal. We’d probably say something like ‘it’s really starting to feel like autumn’

2024年10月4日

Today, the weather is much cooler. It can be said that it is becoming autumn then winter now. I haven't run for donkey's years and now I really want to try again.

Well-written, but just to nitpick towards perfection: "it is becoming autumn then winter now" sounds a bit clunky to me. "It is becoming autumn now then winter will soon follow" is an alternative. I agree with the other corrector about "it can be said" sounding formal but it's all good. If it's too cold then run faster! (maybe)

2024年10月4日

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