Judy
People in China live in a modern society and with a extremely convenient life，which means living in China is much more easier than any other countries.Chinese like foreigners come and visit China.They are hospitable and welcoming.
2021年6月7日 20:03
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People in China live in a modern society and have an extremely convenient
life, which means that living in China is much easier than in other
countries. Chinese people like foreigners to come and visit China. They are very hospitable and welcoming.
Very true! 我爱中国。我要回厦门。
2021年6月7日
受邀老師
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People in China live in a modern society and with extremely convenient lives, which means living in China is much easier than in any other country. Chinese people like it when foreigners come and visit China. They are hospitable and welcoming.
This isn't an issue with grammar, but I might rephrase the beginning of the first sentence: "People in China live extremely convenient lives in a modern society..."
2021年6月7日
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