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It is my essay: "The tables illustrate the potation consumption and production in five different parts of the world (South and Central America, Africa, North America, Europe, and Asia) in 2006.
Overall, Europe was the largest consumer, while Asia was the major potato producer.
Looking at the figures in more detail, regarding consumption of potatoes, the average European person consumed just over 96 kg. The second highest figure was recorded in North America, with nearly 60 kg eaten per person , which was four times higher than that for Africa. Next comes South and Central America and Asia ,these areas had nearly similar levels of consumption, accounting for 23,6 and 25,8 kg per person, respectively.
Turning to the regional production, the production of potatoes was highest in Asia, at 131,2 million tonnes, followed by Europe, at 126,3 million. The figure for North America ranked third, at nearly 25 million. Finally, two minor potato producers were Africa and South and Central America, comprising 15,6 and 16,4 million tonnes ,respectively."
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2023年8月2日 18:31
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It is my essay: "The tables illustrate the consumption and production of potatoes
in five different continents (South and Central America, Africa, North
America, Europe, and Asia) in 2006. Overall, Europe was the largest consumer,
while Asia was the major potato producer. Looking at the figures in more detail,
regarding the consumption of potatoes, the average European person consumed just
over 96 kg. The second highest figure was recorded in North America, with nearly
60 kg eaten per person, which was four times higher than that for Africa. Next (after Africa? This is confusing)
came South and Central America and Asia ,these areas had similar levels
of consumption, accounting for 23,6 (DO NOT USE COMMAS AS DECIMAL POINTS) and 25,8 kg per person, respectively.
Turning to the regional production, the growth of potatoes was highest in
Asia, at 131,2 million tonnes, followed by Europe, at 126,3 million. The figure
for North America ranked third, at nearly 25 million. Finally, two minor potato
producers were Africa and South and Central America, comprising 15,6 and 16,4
million tonnes ,respectively." Hope to receive your feedback
You could also mention which areas either ate more than they grew or the other way around. Clearly South and Central America and North America must have imported potatoes.
2023年8月3日
It is my essay: "The tables illustrate the potation consumption and production in five different parts of the world (South and Central America, Africa, North America, Europe, and Asia) in 2006.
Overall, Europe was the largest consumer, while Asia was the major potato producer.
Looking at the figures in more detail, regarding consumption of potatoes, the average European person consumed just over 96 kg. The second highest figure was recorded in North America, with nearly 60 kg eaten per person , which was four times higher than that for Africa. Next comes South and Central America and Asia ,these areas had nearly similar levels of consumption, accounting for 23,6 and 25,8 kg per person, respectively.
Turning to the regional production, the production of potatoes was highest in Asia, at 131,2 million tonnes, followed by Europe, at 126,3 million. The figure for North America ranked third, at nearly 25 million. Finally, two minor potato producers were Africa and South and Central America, comprising 15,6 and 16,4 million tonnes ,respectively."
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It's not a correction, but a comment on your writing. "The ranks of consumption and production of potatoes by continent are not the same. However, we can't simply compare them because the two data units are not the same. Using the 2006 population data, I calculated the per capita production as follows: 26.0kg, 17.3kg, 72.7kg, 173.0kg, 32.6kg, according to the order of continents shown in the table. As a result, it is proven that the ranks of consumption and production are the same. However, the causal relationship between production and consumption is not known, i.e., whether consumption affects production or production affects consumption. On the other hand, the consumption rate (= consumption/production) by continent ranged from 55.5% (Europe) to 90.8% (South and Central America). It is unknown how the remaining quantity was disposed of."
2023年8月5日
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