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From the Game of Thrones, I learned that our destinies would always become a reality. Regardless of the difficulties, everything would always turn out as planned. This lesson was reviewed with Lord stark's children, and they all ended up where they were supposed to be.
2024年2月28日 21:32
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Your text is essentially correct but it could be improved, check this out: "From Game of Thrones, I learned that our destinies will always come to fruition, regardless of the challenges we face. This lesson was exemplified through the journeys of Lord Stark's children, all of whom ultimately ended up where they were meant to be."
2024年2月28日
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