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One of Japanese traditional cloth is called ‘’Yukata’’. It is often worn in summer. In Japan, festivals are often held in the summer, so we can find people who is wearing ''Yukata'' on some festivals. It makes us feel Japanese traditional summer, so there some foreign people wearing it. It’s also cool.
2023年7月6日 12:43
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One type of traditional Japanese garment is called yukata. It is often worn in summer. In Japan, festivals are often held in the summer, so we can find people wearing yukata at these festivals. The Japanese are fond of this summertime tradition, so some foreigners wear it too. It’s also cool.
Good job. Notes: 1) cloth, clothes, clothing are related but refer to different things (cloth = fabric like cotton, silk, etc.; clothing and clothes = things you wear like shirt, dress, pants, etc., with clothing being formal and clothes being informal) - I changed "cloth" to "garment" which means a specific item of clothing. 2) I found yukata in several English dictionaries so it appears to be an English word (of foreign origin) and thus it is just yukata (not capitalized, and no need for quotation marks or italics). 3) "It makes us feel Japanese traditional summer" doesn't make sense, but let me know if my revision isn't what you meant.
2023年7月6日
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