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Hey Italki buddies! Would be grateful if sb could correct my IELTS Writing Task 2 response to the following question: In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience. An increasing number of people use shopping as a way to have fun instead of treating it seriously. In my opinion, this is a negative development, which comes at an astonishing environmental cost, and has a damaging effect on the family budget. One serious problem that can arise from people purchasing goods impulsively is that it exacerbates pollution. When people become victims of consumerism and buy clothing for fun, fashion industries are prompted to produce new goods. During the manufacturing process, the air becomes polluted because of carbon emissions. Moreover, waters are also affected. To illustrate that, research has proven that the majority of all materials used by fashion industries are made from plastic, which eventually ends up in the oceans. Another issue is that shopping as an entertainment can have side effects on the family budget. In other words, instead of planning each shopping trip and expenditures, people squander their money on items they do not even need. As a result of such irrational behaviour, they may lack finances for the necessary goods. My own situation is a perfect example of this. When I was a student, I used to stroll at malls with my friends because I considered it a great pastime. However, by lapse of time, I started to notice I was saving on food and did not have a proper diet. In conclusion, although it has become more popular for people to treat shopping as entertainment, it brings about too many issues for this to be considered a positive trend.
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My Turkish friend her Turkish name is Ece, her English name is Zoe, we can be the best friend because we both like Korean music and dramas, she has a cute personality that makes me think that I have a younger sister probably because she is the youngest in her family she is so immature and childish so I feel really happy to play with her because her actions is adorable, and I'm childish, too, 😂😂 we played a lot of dumb things together, I remember her cute behaviour was her head accidentally hit on the window when she tried to see outdoor view closely and she felt so embarrassed so she told me just kept it secret 😂 She loves to watch horror movies and I don't like it but she insists me watch with her and she told me if there's a bloody scene she will let me know so I can cover my eyes, and after watching horror movies I have no idea what this storyline was talking about because I only watched the begging and ending of the horror movies normally those part didn't show any brutal scenes. I can read horror novels but not films because films are too graphic. I don't play any games related to killing humans before, Ece wanted me to play with her so she recommended me to play pubg, it was nice to play with my friends but I felt bored so I don't play it anymore. She always wants me accompanied by her so I didn't have my own space. Thankfully she had a boyfriend from Hong Kong (I told you the classmate before) they both studied in the same subject and they got married in 2023.
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