For the past few days I have been studying the use of conjuctions and so I made the following story using them. I would be grateful if you help me by correcting it please. 🤗 ☆SUN AND It’s PLANETS☆ Once upon a time there was a brilliant and extraordinary star, Named the Sun. Sun lived in a city called Milky Way and since millions of years ago, it took care of nine planets. According to history, it had a special place for each planet. Actually, the planets were very happy rotating around Sun; futher they had their own space to spin without any problem. They’re A family called Solar System. Although they had been a family for millions of years, they had never had a meeting, the reason was because Gravity controlled their lives and she was very estrict. But, Gravity wasn’t bad, she only followed the rules of Cosmos. To be continued...

For the Past few days I have been studying the use of conjuctions, before I made use of in the following story using them, I will thank you if you help me correct, please. 🤗 ☆SUN AND HER PLANETS☆ Once upon a time, a brilliant and extraordinary star, its name was Sun. Sun lived in a city called Milky Way and since millions of years ago, she took care of about nine planets. Accordingly to history, she had a special place for each of the planets . Actually the planets were very happy rotating around Sun; futher they had their own space to spin without any problems . They are called family, otherwise they are called the Solar System. Although they had been a family for millions of years , they had never had a meeting before , the reason was because Gravity controlled their lifes and she was very strict , But Gravity wasn’t bad, she only followed the rules of Cosmos. To be continued...