Does My sentence make sence? I told my friend about the incident which is took place at railway station. But my friend didn't buy it.

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Does my sentence make sense ? I told my friend about the incident at the railway station but (s)he didn't buy it.

'which took place' is redundant i.e. unnecessary ; the second sentence can be combined with the first, and you should avoid starting a sentence with the word 'but'. 'didn't buy it' is a slang expression meaning 'didn't believe it'

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Does My sentence make sence? I told my friend about the incident which is took place at railway station. But my friend didn't buy it.

Does my sentence make sense? I told my friend about the incident which took place at the railway station, but my friend didn’t buy it. Your were mostly correct:)

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Does My sentence make sense? Google translate: I told my friend about this incident that took place at the train station. But my friend didn't buy it. Source: I told my friend about the incident which is took place at railway station. But my friend didn't buy it.

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