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The first thing I want to say is that my English is quite bad so I might make some mistakes in my writing, please check and fix them. Thank you! Somebody in this world may want to turn their hobby into a career and they might think that was a good idea. But for me, it's actually not because this decision can change your life in a bad way. First of all, the job which involves your hobby should be a developed job and give you a good salary to earn your living. Because choosing a career is not only based on your interests but also on the benefits that it brings to you. Otherwise, if you choose a job but it don't benefit you, you'll regret about this decision in the next few years. On the other hand, if your hobby brings money and opportunities to you, just keep doing that hobby and turning it into your career in the future. However, as I said before, you should be careful when you choose a career for yourself. Remember to consider two things: what you are interested in and will it bring benefits to you! This is my opinion. What about yours? Thanks for reading!
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The first thing I want to say is that my English is quite bad so I might make some mistakes in my writing, please check and fix them. Thank you! Somebody in this world may want to turn their hobby into a career and they might think that is a good idea. But for me, it's actually not because this decision can change your life in a bad way. First of all, a job which involves your hobby should be a developed job and give you a good salary to earn your living. This is because choosing a career is not only based on your interests but also on the benefits that it brings to you. Otherwise, if you choose a job but it doesn't benefit you, you'll have regrets about this decision in the next few years. On the other hand, if your hobby brings money and opportunities to you, just keep doing that hobby and turning it into your career in the future. However, as I said before, you should be careful when you choose a career for yourself. Remember to consider two things: what you are interested in and if it will bring benefits to you! This is my opinion. What about yours? Thanks for reading!
Great response :) only a couple corrections needed! If you use "to regret" as a verb, you don't need the word "about." However, if you want to use about, you should say "to have regrets about". E.g. She regretted saying that. He regretted his decision. I have regrets about joining the military.
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