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Cinderella

Cinderella is girl honest , polite and clear . She's always connected to with her father . She has a bossy Uncle and rude sisters. She's often sneaky on her sisters. She's capable finish the work quickly. She's fearless of any animals. She loves express her feeling.

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Cinderella

Cinderella is girl honest , polite and clear . She's always connected to with her father . She has a bossy Uncle and rude sisters. She's often sneaky on her sisters. She's capable finish the work quickly. She's fearless of any animals. She loves express her feeling.

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Okay.. Not a bad submission, I understood all of it :D I just wanna make some small changes quickly.

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Cinderella is *an honest girl*, polite and clear . She's always connected with her father. She has a bossy uncle and rude sisters. She's often sneaky *towards* her sisters. She's capable *of finishing her* work quickly. She's fearless *towards any animal.* She loves express her *feelings.