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冯雯雯
October 24 is sunny
I leave home to 上海 today
my parents let me to bring eggs to 上海,I said IT is pretty easy to buy eggs at Shanghai.but they said home's egg is beter than Shanghai's😂
I prepared to meet my sister this afternoon in Shanghai.so I have to take the heavy eggs around the city in the whole afternoon.and then bring it to my home.
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Today is October 24 and it is sunny.
I left home to go to Shanghai today.
My parents let me bring eggs to Shnaghai. I said it is pretty easy to buy eggs in Shanghai but they said homegrown eggs are better than Shanghai's. 😂
I got redy to meet my sister this afternoon in Shanghai. So, I have to take the heavy eggs around the city all afternoon and then bring them to my home.
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Today is October 24 and it is sunny.
I left home to go to Shanghai today.
My parents let me bring eggs to Shanghai. I said it is pretty easy to buy eggs in Shanghai but they said homegrown eggs are better than Shanghai's eggs. 😂
I got ready to meet my sister this afternoon in Shanghai. So, I have to take the heavy eggs around the city all afternoon and then bring them to my home.
I'm sorry I'm having some problems with this right now. I will re-do the corrections now.
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October 24 is sunny
I leave home for 上海 today
my parents asked me to bring eggs from 上海,I said it is pretty easy to buy eggs in Shanghai.but they said my home eggs are better than Shanghai's😂
I plan to meet my sister this afternoon in Shanghai. to help me carry the heavy eggs around the city the whole afternoon, and then bring them to my home.
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Sorry but I misspelled Shanghaii the second time and pushed submit before I could correct it. "Shanghai" is the correct spelling.
Also, ready should be spelled "ready".
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冯雯雯
المهارات اللغوية
الصينية (المندرية), الإنجليزية
لغة التعلّم
الإنجليزية
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