a composition Some people say cultural traditions in some countries are destroyed because they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists.Others think this is the only way to protect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. ------- below is my composition------------------------ There has long been a wide-ranging dicussion as cultural tradions.A number of people deem cultural tradions what are used for making money in tourism are destroyed; Another say it's protection them. I assent to the former persective. On one hand,those who believe using cultural tradions to attract tourists is a protection method tend to state the following reasons.Firstly,it's beneficial to motivate enthusiasm of local people for protecting cultural traditions.Because the opinion holders think tourists'objectives are experiencing local cultures and customs, local people will must to keep their cultural traditions as original apppearance as they can how to keep attracting tourists.If original factors aren't been saved very well,tourists won't interest in the spot what maybe harm the local tourism income.Secondly,tourism will make cultural traditions grow in worldwide popularity what will attract more attenctions so as to protect that.If there isn't a widespread attention,it won't arouse more people's interests,so less and less people know it that maybe gradually disappeare in people' lives. However,the argument made by opponents should not be neglected.They think cultural traditions are destroyed by tourism.The reasons are as follows.First of all,Great profits of tourism drive cultural traditions to be egregiously packed,so that lose their original oppearences.Due to many spots where have been changed for pandering to tourists are more and more commercialized and have hadn't the authentic cultural traditions.Such as Li Jiang China.In addtion,A massive cultural invasions destroy local cultural traditions.Because outsiders bring their cultures and something what local people haven't,so a lot of new and interesting things attract local people who gradually lose the sense of national identity.The cultural traditions in some countries are destroyed as this. Obviously,it is hard for both sides to come to an agreement on this complicated issue.Personally, I prefer to agree the viewpoint---using cultural traditions to attract tourists for making money is destroying it.

An IELTS composition Differences between countries are becoming less evident nowdays.People tend to have same films,music,brands,TV channels,etc. To what extent do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? =========below is my composition=============== The phenomenon of less evident differences between countries becomes common.It's a trend that individuales like similar films,music,brand,or others,etc.I think,there are more disadvantages than advantages in the phenomenon. To be ture,there are some advantages in that.Firstly,less differences mean we have more similar hobbies with each other, maybe make more friends easily.Becaues similar hobbies mean that we have more topics to communicate what can let us understand better with each other and it's the foundation of friendship.Secondly,for example,people liking same film style,that possible to increase compentitive intensity in the film industry what accelerates the srvival of the fittest.Thereby,promoting the development of the film industry. Although,differences becoming less evident between countries have more disadvantages.First of all,that maybe limit diversity development of all professions and trades.because products(such as music,films,brands,etc.)to pander to public tastes for gaining more market shares,more money.In addition,differences in the local cultures of all around the world are less and less evident,even more may disappear over time,Due to people liking popular things what be widely publicized by mass medias,and they will think their local cultures are outlated,so people will forget them gradually.Besiders,under the influence of this trend,people have been deprived their individuality,their own mind.For example,to like same clothes brands,people who lost their own aesthetic and deem that everyone thinks beautiful is beautiful.Maybe they don't know what style of clothes are best for them. For the reasons presented above,I approve of the perspective that the disadvantages of the less evident difference between countries are more than advantages. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Please help me for revising my composition, thank you very much. If you can describe my mistake in Chinese,that's best.

What's mean of the Enlish sentence a hard heel of brown bread whitened with margarine The above sentence is an example sentence forth dictionary, I don't know its mean, please translate it into Chinese, thank you very much!

excuse me! is my Enlish name normal? hello everyone, my English name is Cloris, name by myself. I found it on a English name list of a dictionary. There is a bit strange what I have seen some Chinese names of foreign friends , but their names are not wrong and not ridiculous. just don't like named by Chinese. So, I want to know whether my English name is strange, or with any wrong? Is it normal in foreign friends' eyes? I don't want my name as same as so many people, so, if just isn't used by a lot of people, that's ok. I worry about it seems strange or odd. my English is poor, I don't know whether I have expressed myself very well. thank you for read this or answer.