The magazine which front cover is my favorite singer was on sale today. I bought it right away after classes at university. Her pictures were amazing. She was like a model at Paris Collection…… so beautiful…… I wholeheartedly love her and her style.
The magazine with my favorite singer on the cover was on sale today. I bought it right away after classes at university. Her pictures were amazing. She was like a model at Paris Collection…… so beautiful…… I wholeheartedly love her and her style.
This is correct assuming "Paris Collection" is a proper name that is usually used without any article. If you are unsure, I suggest you Google it and see how people normally use "Paris Collection" in a sentence, with or without a "the", etc. Also, using a lot of "...." like this outside the bounds of grammar. It was a stylistic choice, so I left it alone, but I suspect you already know not to write that way for a formal occasion.
17. April 2023
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